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it happened after they came by =MMF7734:iconMMF7734:


©2004-2009 =MMF7734
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this room is melting
but the agents cant see
they are busy with the suspect
ask him why he wears this mask
twitching as parasites eat his skin
and watching ghosts in the corner...and then they ask him about the screaming...
he looks above at the thought
bubble over his head
searching for some tale to tell
eyes widen...closing in
on the hot wax ceiling that's about to fall...

...down in the streets they run briskly
looking for closets
the kid has got to sleep
hungry they wait, throats sleeping

some odd hybrid of an explanation and a warning squeals out of his lips
and his bobs low and thinks like an eel
until he squirms away
legs reforming as he picks up speed into
some kind of a run...pulling the mask back over his
true face
he sees their eyes in the alleys
as he runs past
he looks at his thoughts like postcards
and goes back in time
to warn himself to stay away
from places that
scream
as he leaves he hopes they both remember to write
it down

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:iconc0ldblood3db1tch:
OOOOO. so dark. wonderful. I love the description too! you rock.

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We were just a beautiful dream. I dont want to wake up. Im blinking, were fading. Lost in a tear. Falling to ashes. Rubbing the sleep from my eyes, I erase you. Only to return tomorrow.
:iconleeflame:
you put pretty cool effects in it. I luv the colors.
beautiful work!

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purr...
:icongreenie:
yay :boogie:

i've really missed reading your work :O_o:

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Break free from your deviantart addiction >_>
:iconmmf7734:
:bow: :) thanks m8.... there more too :nod:

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sell yr ego 4 food
& yr soul 4 ca$h
...and don't forget
2 steal 'em both back....
:iconmmf7734:
Hey Tyank you
I was happy with how alot of mistakes I made
turned out to be better than what I had in mind
im glad you enjoyed this :)
thanks

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sell yr ego 4 food
& yr soul 4 ca$h
...and don't forget
2 steal 'em both back....
:iconmmf7734:
:D
Thanks so much
yeah half of my work is the description
in almost everyone I put
a full thought out oiece of prose in them, rather than a traditional script....:shrug: thanks again for your comment, Im happy you liked the whole pacxkage:hug:

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sell yr ego 4 food
& yr soul 4 ca$h
...and don't forget
2 steal 'em both back....
:iconc0ldblood3db1tch:
:hug: I do.

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We were just a beautiful dream. I dont want to wake up. Im blinking, were fading. Lost in a tear. Falling to ashes. Rubbing the sleep from my eyes, I erase you. Only to return tomorrow.
:iconmmf7734:
:) wait til ya see the new one :nod:

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sell yr ego 4 food
& yr soul 4 ca$h
...and don't forget
2 steal 'em both back....
:iconc0ldblood3db1tch:
:)

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We were just a beautiful dream. I dont want to wake up. Im blinking, were fading. Lost in a tear. Falling to ashes. Rubbing the sleep from my eyes, I erase you. Only to return tomorrow.

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